Victor Taking Stock

As I look through all of the papers scattered throughout my dorm room I can see that we have actually gone over a lot in this class, and I've done more drafts on the essays for this class than any other class in my writing experience. I like seeing the differentiation of each draft and how you said that expanding one claim or one idea will enhance the essay a whole bunch. The essays used to seem all the same, but now I look through all of them and I can tell a very clear difference between each and the voice that I used. I need to do a couple more drafts on each paper and work on the research aspects on a couple of them and expand my ideas a bit further and I think I will have a pretty solid portfolio.